The Whole Story Blog
Characters, plot, theme, setting, POV, voice, tone, dialogue…writing is the ultimate balancing act. In order to keep all these balls in the air, we writers needs to know what those balls are, how they work, and how not to drop them. That’s the goal of this blog - to look at the craft of writing from every angle, to help writers hone their skills, and to know when to ask for help.
Elements of a Successful Story: Part 3
In the final installment of my three-part series of posts on the 7 Key Elements of Story Structure, I take on the criticism that story structure makes for formulaic stories. In fact, the opposite is true. Find out why, and how story structure can help you write a story only you could write. Then, we dive into Act 3.
POV Bright Spots and Blind Spots
What POV have you chosen to write your story in? Why? Do you understand it’s strengths? It’s weaknesses? In this post, I take a look at one of the most important choices you will make about your story.
Elements of a Successful Story: Part 2
In Part 2 of my three-part series on the seven elements of successful stories, I dig into Act 2. The famously Messy Middle can be daunting, hazy, overwhelming. Many writers find themselves lost in the story woods at this point in their story. But Act 2 does have some key guideposts that can help you navigate through the story woods.
Elements of a Successful Story: Part 1
Understanding the hidden architecture of stories is the key to getting to The End. This series of posts looks at the Seven Elements that all stories share. When you hit all seven elements, you’ll have a story that works. Miss an element, misunderstand an element, or lack clarity on an element, and you’ll struggle to write a story that works. In Part 1, we look at your Open and your Inciting Incident.
The Secret to Engaging Worldbuilding
Worldbuilding is not something just speculative fiction writers need to think about. All stories need worldbuilding. It’s what grounds the reader in the characters’ world. Without it, it’s hard for readers to fully understand the story and the characters.
Don’t Make this Common Writing Mistake!
One of the most common mistakes that I see in my editing and coaching practice is a story with a passive protagonist.
Like a writer deciding to wait for the perfect writing day to happen to them, passive protagonists sit back and wait for the story to happen to them.
But readers lose interest in passive protagonists pretty quickly.
Why You Should Plan Your Word Count
Did you know that every genre has an acceptable word count range?
It’s based on things like reader expectations (or tolerance, as it were) on length, book sales, and even the price of paper.
And it can mean the difference between your book getting published, or languishing indefinitely on your desktop.
The Problem of the Ever-Present Narrator
An important part of character interiority is seeing a POV character reference their life experience and future hopes on the page as they are faced with choices and challenges.
When this gets left out, you end up with what’s called an ever-present narrator.
Developmental Edit vs Coaching: Which Path is Right for Me?
A developmental edit is a good option if you’re someone who likes to learn on their own.
1:1 coaching is a good option if you’re someone who learns best with a guide. Someone who wants the structure and accountability.
Which approach works best for you?
Know Thyself, Know Thy Story
How do you know if you’re trying out a new genre for the right reasons?
The answer, writer, is to know thyself.